Angel

wow lol truly B-E-A-UTIFUL
KEEP ON GOING U HAVE A TALENT THAT SHOULDNT BE WASTED
I TRULY ENJOYED IT LMAO

-sIDDA lYNN

Thanks Sidda. You know I am a fan of your poems as well. I hope to have more coming as soon as my vacation isn't soo darn crowded!!!
Alys~

beautiful,simply beautiful!

Wonderful sweety!!!!^^

great alys uve got GREAT talent i hope ull write new poems soon....:))))

Thanks everyone^^ I suppose I will...:P

I don't think it fits into the property of "rhyme" but hell, its like all mushy and romantic... lol, excellent job for the love story =]

Thanks sir...
I know its not in the rhyme format...free verse

Wow, that was a truly amazing poem. The wording, the format, the way it was just beautiful. You should become a professional Writer for poems.

That deeply moved me. Congratulations.

Thanks Ruby... I get that sometimes
I hope to find inspiration for more

Thanks everyone for the encouragement

Alys~