bathtub murder- a poem

cool poem! u've could have made it more sad and agressive though.. but other than tht it was cool

its very good! kao says he likes it too :D

Very nice,indeed its my style.

I actually like it a lot.

oh thank you ^-^

Now that's my type of poem. *stands & applauds*

it kind of gives me a sense of enduring pain, or event you wish to break.

But yeah, its a pretty awesome poem, im thinking about getting into this sort of thing myself.

very good! never let go of that wonderful ability to write.

really good, well written, I liked it a lot :-)

GREAT poem... I actually like it a lot!