Creepy poem

Sometimes i listen to your heart
its beats are just like music art
singing into my ear
at that time there's nothing that i fear

you touch me with your soul
my body is under your control
if i'm with you that is no crime
together we can freeze the time

when we kiss the floor is gone
we can fly into the dawn
throughout the sky we make sweet love
our love recieves a blessing from above

the ones who love each other
don't need no love from another
if your really ment to be together
you will love and love remains forever!

Oh WOW, Brim I love that one......

Is it me or are they getting more lovie dovie than dark ROFL

=) good work

LOL...i guess i'm an all around poet?
=D

Well all round is better than being all square LOL

But we all know who started the poetry, so we have alot to thank this person for.

You know who i mean =)

YEP! The one and only Amari the poet has made poets out of most of us!

Yes i see that B/S and Midge have a great gift. It warms me to see such good friendship between 2 people.
So Priest Amari began all the poetry here then. All i can say is well done to you all,you all have good hearts and strong emotions.

We're family!
She's me other mommy!
Right? LOL =D
It warms me to have souch friends!

OK...this isn't my poem but this one reached deep into my heart!!!

I went to a party,


And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mum
So I had a sprite instead.

I felt proud of myself,

The way you said I would,
That I didn't drink and drive,
Though some friends said I should.

I made a healthy choice,

And your advice to me was right,
The party finally ended,
And the kids drove out of sight.

I got into my car,

Sure to get home in one piece,
I never knew what was coming, Mum
Something I expected least.

Now I'm lying on the pavement,

And I hear the policeman say,
The kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
Mum, his voice seems far away.

My own blood's all around me,

As I try hard not to cry.
I can hear the paramedic say,
This girl is going to die.

I'm sure the guy had no idea,

While he was flying high,
Because he chose to drink and drive,
Now I would have to die.

So why do people do it, Mum

Knowing that it ruins lives?
And now the pain is cutting me,
Like a hundred stabbing knives.

Someone should have taught him,
That it's wrong to drink and drive.
Maybe if his parents had,
I'd still be alive.

My breath is getting shorter, Mum

I'm getting really scared.
These are my final moments,
And I'm so unprepared.

I wish that you could hold me Mum,

As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say, 'I love you, Mum!'
So I love you and good-bye.

This poem has reached my heart more than any other...
I hope that parents won't experiance this!
I know it will happen...so let's pray not to many times!

JEEZEE PEEPS, now as a parent, that has just opened my eyes Brim. Its actually made me cry. =(
I hope most of the young read this and understand the consiquences of drink driving. I hope no more parents go through that. WOW

yeah...it touches your heart so much you fee guilty for drving at all!