Creepy poem

yay...I FINALLY MADE A GOOD LYRIC!
...i think...

When you look at me,
tell me what do you see?
am i a freak
i'm not what you want me to be!

after the first look at me you judge
you think i maybe holding a grudge
that my intentions are wrong
and my hatred grew strong

let me tell you
i want you to see
what i've been holding deep inside me
i know you hate me
i don't know why
i know you'll hate me
no matter how hard i try
so who's the monster here?
who is the one cutting deep
cutting deep like cutting with a spear?

why do you not look in my eyes
you will see
i'm the one who cries!
you made me who i am!
no more hiding!
GOD DAMN!

Wow
You are my fav poet
I realy like those lyrics
Those lyrics are in the style of disturbed
Do you know those guys?
They could make souch a good song out of that!!!!!!!!!
You are my best!

Yes I know them!...
they are actually my favorite band!
do you really thing they'd like this lyric?...thanks for the compliment!
you made me blush *shy*
LOL

yah, your good, but now for making hearts sad, howabout a happy 1?

you are so awesome!!! ^_^

gee...a happy song...hmmm...
i'm sorry...i don't se the world happy in any view...
But i'll try my best!
And thanks for the compliments...=D

Things that make me wanna jump
Things that makes me touch your hump(rofl)
things that turn the world around
things that make a clown astound

all those things make us go yahoo
but what keeps me going is just you!

spin the wheel of fortune now
win some money buy a cow
then we dance all night and move
shake your but and make me groove (XD)

I kow it's bad...but this is as happy as i get ... LOL

LOL win some money buy a cow..... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
i almost fell off my chair XD

You left without a warning
so unexpected
now our hearts are burning
you said no goodbye
i know you wanted
but you didn't want to see us cry

hey...no worries
as long as you are feelin' fine
to you a toast with the best of wine!
a sad goodbye indeed we had
but no harm feelings noone's mad!

JUST A BIT MORE SAD


To Midge!

Looks like you really miss Midge
I'm sorry for your loss
You guys were really close werent you?
Cheer up dude
We will get you up and stand beside you!