Creepy poem

10000 UNITS OF DEATH

I suffer
and I see no end
I won't be home for supper
I must descend

I've done great things
though something was bad
I wont get wings
I made HIM mad

for that I get
a unit of death
I left with some pain
and now I'm in debt

second shot
is for curses I've said
a unit of death
for the words I have bled

third one isn't that kind
a unit of death
for sins
that flew through my mind

other 9900 and 97
are still yet to come
the pain is immense
and I'm not close to be done

never did knew
how many sins I have had
as big as I grew
my soul has gone bad

good job with the poeams brim.

Thanks Zakaki

C'mon Brim...keep it going i love your poems!
i have no idea how the hell you come up with them...
absolutely amazing!
the last one gave me creeps
great job keep it going

yeah amazing Brim
i absolutely love your poems
you must be a very sensitive guy
don't be ashamed of it!
Big men also cry!

Oh and i love your new profile pic lol heeheehehehehee
makes me hungry though

i love them all u r really good

Thanks yall...i will be posting as soon as i get some more inspiration!
Thanks again!

Mommy, Mommy,
As you lie,
The Dark Man comes
And makes you cry.

Daddy's hands
Are red with guilt,
Because he killed
The life we built.

ok the last one was creepy like really creepy