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A Spell to improve hearing. My first spell, dont juddge me (:

Someones talking,
But I cannot hear,
Lend me a cat's ear,
One ears fine,
Two ears- great,
In my mind
It shall translate.

Ehh not as great. Rate? (haha xD)
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its great
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Hey thanks (:
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Can I ask why you used translate other than for the rhyme scheme?

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Not really suree... :o'
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Lol. Translation assumes that you are going from one from to another.

All in all, I'd say first good try though.

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Haha thanks xD
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Is this all to the spell? Not a ritual and a sacrifice to air for improving your hearing or to a deity? Would you repeat it once a day? Would you wear a silver peircing for healing? You have a great start but it needs a continuation to me. Great though, you got talent!
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